let's not split hairs
it's definitely not amazing animation, BUT... it reflects a good amount of effort and creativity. don't pay any attention to the one who gave you a zero. that's just unfair. you actually planned it, gave it good effort, and most importantly expressed something fairly original. it sounds like ur kinda just starting out, esp. w/ flash, so i think ur right where you should be. don't let the critics get you down! keep improving!